I liked this
It has a dialogue, a bit goofy to be honest, but true to the character and to the story. I am amazed that you were able to create so much in such a short amount of time. You astound me and I hope to see more work from you. Oh, and super kudos goes to SHADOWFOX2 because the music was choreographed so well. I like it though, a story, an epic fight, and a twist that definitely looked great and kept me watching.
Thanks so much! :D Yeah I tend to lean towards cartoony styles haha so its okay that it can get a little goofy. I'm glad it still kept your attention and you liked too! I appreciate the review. and yeah Shadowfox is awesome :)
I would say...
"That I understand that this was a school project and so because I rely heavily on comedic relief and long reviews to forget how miserable my life really is, I will call this sufficient".
Ok first off, this flash was good (especially if you compare it to some of the other flashes seen here), and it holds the mood very well. So what if the man seems pathetic because of his imaginary girlfriend, maybe that actually added DEPTH to the character and made him more human. If you really wanted to imagine something, you could imagine that this guys wife couldv'e passed away and he wasn't willing to come to grips with it until he met a widower who happened to be going through the same thing. Would you have felt it to have been more dopey then? Its human to be in denial on some topics, such as being alone. I feel that this flash wasn't meant to entertain you with comedy, but to tell you a story about a man who is humanly imperfect finding someone imperfect like him and falling in love. To me this says that nobody is perfect, and that maybe its those similiar flaws that draw us together.
Apologies to you Wonchop for commenting this way, but I really enjoyed your work and to see Phobotech put this down by saying its just sufficient started me up. Have a nice day
the voice wasn't that terribly clear, and the dog running was a little off, but overall I give you an 8 because the things I listed were the only problems I had with it. keep it up
I love mindlessly playing this game for hours on end. Its makes me smile
I love your work. enough said. I look in the art section and open it whenever I see your name. You are literally that good
Well, I do rather enjoy the concept that you are bringing to Dennis. You give him a bloodthirsty insanity in just 3 colors, absolutely beautiful. The only problem that I even have with this piece is his t-shirt curves as though he has boobs. Dennis can can described as mad.... and females can be categorized as crazy at least every once in a while.... but Dennis is no female. I will take this piece as how it looks and consider another great sense of expression. Good job, keep putting your works up here. ;D
Thanks man, i think it looks like that because i tried to make it look like hes sticking his chest out like hes proud of how menacing he is. But i can see what you mean, haha. Il try and make him less femenine next time!
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