I liked this
It has a dialogue, a bit goofy to be honest, but true to the character and to the story. I am amazed that you were able to create so much in such a short amount of time. You astound me and I hope to see more work from you. Oh, and super kudos goes to SHADOWFOX2 because the music was choreographed so well. I like it though, a story, an epic fight, and a twist that definitely looked great and kept me watching.
Thanks so much! :D Yeah I tend to lean towards cartoony styles haha so its okay that it can get a little goofy. I'm glad it still kept your attention and you liked too! I appreciate the review. and yeah Shadowfox is awesome :)
I would say...
"That I understand that this was a school project and so because I rely heavily on comedic relief and long reviews to forget how miserable my life really is, I will call this sufficient".
Ok first off, this flash was good (especially if you compare it to some of the other flashes seen here), and it holds the mood very well. So what if the man seems pathetic because of his imaginary girlfriend, maybe that actually added DEPTH to the character and made him more human. If you really wanted to imagine something, you could imagine that this guys wife couldv'e passed away and he wasn't willing to come to grips with it until he met a widower who happened to be going through the same thing. Would you have felt it to have been more dopey then? Its human to be in denial on some topics, such as being alone. I feel that this flash wasn't meant to entertain you with comedy, but to tell you a story about a man who is humanly imperfect finding someone imperfect like him and falling in love. To me this says that nobody is perfect, and that maybe its those similiar flaws that draw us together.
Apologies to you Wonchop for commenting this way, but I really enjoyed your work and to see Phobotech put this down by saying its just sufficient started me up. Have a nice day
the voice wasn't that terribly clear, and the dog running was a little off, but overall I give you an 8 because the things I listed were the only problems I had with it. keep it up
A joke, something to be funny. This isn't that terribly funny. I liked the background, but that was about it
1.morally, (though we aren't supposed to judges by morals anymore)- 0
2.flowing animation, (means the mouths looking like they are actually saying the words they are supposed to)-1
3.the background- 8
weell, it looks like a 4 to me, the background being the only thing keeping this from being a 0. Keep it up, hopefully next time the animation will be good.
It felt like it had a story to it, though its not entirely understood. Love it
I like the animation. I do have to wonder why all of them had to have white hair? sometimes different areas didn't make much sense (I think they way the moved confused me a bit with what they were doing . Overall, its great, background was wonderful, keep up the good work
I appreciate the review! I found this helpful.
To be honest, I was expecting a lot more out of this from the reviews I read about it. I tend to love controversy and chaos and I'll admit that I am a christian, but I won't judge you on how badly you made fun of Christianity. I will tell you that your video had no flow, as though it was made by two different people. I figured you didn't have any real movements cause you were being serious about the whole flash but then you pull that cartoony looking white guy who shoots fish and bread out of his bum (Not saying Jesus cause he lived in the desert and was Jewish, he HAD to have some sort of tan). I don't believe you did this for your brother, otherwise you would've been more serious about the flash and not created something so childish. My only advice to give you is don't be so misleading. Other than that, the beginning held good tone.
What the hell is this? You used a real event like that (that's fine by me) and then you made light of the animosity of black Friday (which is okay by me too), but there is no way IN HELL you are going to be completely alone ANYWHERE in walmart on a black friday unless your an employee in the break room! I won't rate you on morals, (after all, isn't that what America does nowadays, everything literally goes) but I will rate you on your experience on the subject (not to mention the lameness of your ghost, I mean really. He didn't die alone and so you'd think he would attack massively and more brutally than sprained ankles. Thats not even worth mentioning). overall though, your style isn't bad and your main story point is a great idea to work with, you just need to think things through before people say "there is no way in hell that works". You do better than me, I don't even make animations (though I'd love too, can't afford the programs). Keep going, and I'll be looking forward to your next work
Oh, MY FREAKING!!!
That was actually really good. The story at first looked slightly simple but WOW, I FREAKIN LOVE THA SPIKY HAIRED GUY! You grabbed my attention and now I want MORE. My 10 go to you and hope you create a lot more of this story . TILL THEN, ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT!!!!!
The tragic story of having paradise in our hands and then having it yanked away from us. I love the story and its design. A black jester
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