I would say...
"That I understand that this was a school project and so because I rely heavily on comedic relief and long reviews to forget how miserable my life really is, I will call this sufficient".
Ok first off, this flash was good (especially if you compare it to some of the other flashes seen here), and it holds the mood very well. So what if the man seems pathetic because of his imaginary girlfriend, maybe that actually added DEPTH to the character and made him more human. If you really wanted to imagine something, you could imagine that this guys wife couldv'e passed away and he wasn't willing to come to grips with it until he met a widower who happened to be going through the same thing. Would you have felt it to have been more dopey then? Its human to be in denial on some topics, such as being alone. I feel that this flash wasn't meant to entertain you with comedy, but to tell you a story about a man who is humanly imperfect finding someone imperfect like him and falling in love. To me this says that nobody is perfect, and that maybe its those similiar flaws that draw us together.
Apologies to you Wonchop for commenting this way, but I really enjoyed your work and to see Phobotech put this down by saying its just sufficient started me up. Have a nice day